The Intergalactic Highway

okay, this is the first rough drawing iv done of any of my fic character and it is not brilliant, but here it is anyway...
(i apologise if this stretches out the screen!)



as you may ave noticed, he is a tortoise (the really bid/endangered kind, i cant remember the name) and he is a character of y still-drafting alternate series to beast machines. im busy at the moment and cant work on the eps for a while and the plot is still a bit iffy, but its coming along...

his primary weapons are a massive bazuka-like gun as well as aser eyes, and for defense, he grabs the handles on the inside o his shell (as shown) and pulls them in towards himself to make a spherical shield around him. if needed, he can shield others, too. though slow, he is very strong and inelligent. btw dont think hes a rip-off of rhinox, COZ HES NOT! hes y own character with his own personality and he is awesome...to me....

send me your comment. like i said its a rough drawing, id just like to know what you think! lol

Looks very nice and I like the beast mode vs. Robot mode transformation.

Awww, he looks very cuddly in beast mode.... =3

And rough drawings are sometimes the best, because it allows you to get your idea down on paper before you start adjusting them. I think you did very well.

--Starath

Awe, I love turtles and tortoises! His beast mode rocks. XD I love his name too; it fits hiw big shell. Very awesome, Jagna! Keep up the great work! I'd love to see Shellshock in color. ^.^

thanks you guys! ^___^

colour? Ihadnt even thought of that!
im thinking....green...lol!

ya mostly greens and browns...im taking the unique colours from my own tortoise Bunty...SHES SO CUTE! and big...wev got 7 in total. the newest baby is caled speedy...maybe ill post a pic of them together (bunty and speey) coz the size difference is incredible!

lol thanks again!

Sweet, nice tortoise Jag!
The rough drawing makes give you a nice idea of the personality of the character, so you can add details later.
Can I cuddle te tortoise??

You're more than welcome, Jagna.

Browns and greens, eh? I could've guessed that. But it works! And the more mechanical parts would be what? Silver? Or gold like Rhinox's?

Gasp! I'd love to see pictures of your tortoises! That's so neat that you own some. XD I've never had a pet turtle but I still like them. I've come across box turtles before by my grandparents' pond, along with very, very large snappers. I love snappers, despite how nasty they can be. LoL And the only tortoises I've met were ones from the zoo.